Baal design, 8.7.

 

    Comme c’est souvent le cas, il suffit, pour corriger l’erreur, de déplacer l’élément antéposé (un syntagme adjectival) en apposition après le nom qu’il décrit :

 

True to his word, it was striking the Ave Maria as Wentworth turned the corner of Via Felice into Vicolo Zucchelli.

 

It was striking the Ave Maria as Wentworth, true to his word, turned the corner of Via Felice into Vicolo Zucchelli.